Your one of God's greatest creations, that why I'd like to share this story with my nation.
Back when i waas 9 my mom was diagnosed with cancer, the doctors, they us left with no answers.
They never told us how this happend or if it would ever go away, so we all got down on our knee's and prayed.
Times got rough but she stilled managed to smile,I dont know how she always went an extra mile.
My mom often told me about the everlasting pain, The sun was always overshadowed by the rain.
It hurt to see our loved ones head stuck to the toilet bowl, me and my siblings felt like we were missing our whole.
My moms my world,my everything, my pride, i don't know what I would've done if she died.
I remember when she was on her death bed one night, she told me she wasn't going down without one last fight.
I couldn't believe God was going to take her that night.
I've only been with her 9years, that night my pillow was covered in tears.
I prayed and I Prayed that my mom wouldn't go to heaven, I pleaded I even begged him.
About a year later she was pronounced cancer free, after i heard that I felt like i had no worries.
This experience taught me a life lesson, my mom, that strong lady...she's a TRUE blessing. -This poem was wrtten for my mother who is now a cancer survivor.<3
11 comments:
- iLike this It was sad especially at the part where you said iCouldn't believe I was going to lose her that night or something like that when you said that I thought she died until I kept reading but good job glad to hear she is a Cancer Survivor.((:
Thank YOu <3
very very inspirational poem!!!
when you talk about how it is a blessing that she is alive, it was the best part
That was great! You are truly blessed with Poem talent. Great story!
Best story yet. even better tan mine. and you noe my story its really goood like yours but your is better
I LOVE this Poem <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
I swear I almost cried. This is a really good poem. Your poems are really nice. And I know your Mother will be very happy with this. ( : Good Job Tamari!
Wow...really powerful writing. I can't imagine how hard this experience was for your family. You're going to share it with your mom, right?!
thank you1 and Mr.F yes , i planned on it!
aww this is so sweet i was crying a little but i like this poem it was good and thought out and you tould a lot about what happend and how u was feeling
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